Stage diorama - My drawing is the worst!!!!

The part that I want to stage is when Kahu give a speech about Koro in school’s performance. This part showed the process that Kahu felt despair. As the sketch has shown there, Kahu’s at upstage in middle while the audiences are at downstage around her. The middle seat among the audiences should be empty to show that Koro wouldn’t come. The audiences are all in suits or dresses while Kahu’s in a traditional Maori dress as the performance needed to be. There should be a tatto thing on her face. When her speech starts, she should often look back to see if Koro comes. When she notices that he hasn’t come, she would start to cry and continueing the speech. Nanny flower, at backstage, should become kind of angry then.