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One revised:
In the start of the scene, the two lovers showed as their love was much more important than everything, such as their identity and their family. In line 3, Romeo said, “It is the east and Juliet is the sun”. It showed that he was faithful to Juliet at first in case to show the difference in the second balcony scene. I hold my hand, and pointed to Juliet’s window to show Romeo’s yearn for Juliet’s love. When Juliet asked Romeo to banish his identity as a Montague, I was anxious and rushed to Juliet’s sight to say, “I take thee at thy word” to show Romeo’s attention on Juliet’s sweet request. Then, Romeo swore how he loved Juliet in line 112, “Lady, by yonder blessed moon I vow”. However, Juliet was anxious by the variable of the inconstant moon. Then, Romeo started to promise again and again tirelessly. Swearing for several times didn’t bother him at all. It’s a clear contrast to the second part that Romeo asked to leave when Juliet begged him to promise. He has been so patient in this part, when his love to Juliet hasn’t turned sour yet. I pretended there’s the moon on my left and turned to it to bless. Then, I turn back to Juliet and stare at her to praise her beauty and asked for the exchanging of love. The first balcony scene was truly beautiful for both characters at this point.

One new:
The other part of the performance is Act 3 scene 5, the second balcony scene. In this scene, the tone was totally changed that I acted truly depressed and frustrated. This part of the scene was dark; even though the over all setting of the balcony didn’t change at all, the performers changed their color. Both characters were inside the room when the scene started, and I was going to leave to another door when the scene about to end. I wore in black while Juliet wore in white. Both of them are grave colors to imply their dark future. Black also showed constrain and the strong indefinite of his future with banishment. The unchanged background can show the difference between costumes more clear. For music, I put a slow music and it’s inanition to emphasize the desperation in case to give a big contrast in comparing the first and second balcony scene.