outline and thesis

Outline:
Paragraph 1 : intro
Paragraph 2 : talking about basic facts, music, costume of the first  balcony scenes
First body: beginning monologue to show their love and how to perform. (Should combine 1+2)
Second: Romeo’s sincerity to bless by the moon
Third: Romeo’s happiness after Juliet first left (should combine 3 and 4 to analyze the not willing of their leaving)
Fourth: Romeo stayed to see Juliet’s back again and again and wanted to see Friar Lawrence as fast as he could.
Fifth : a paragraph to analyze the costume or music of the second scene.
Sixth: the desperation made Romeo to be angry and impatient. "it was the lark" "come, death"
Seventh: more light and light, to show how he was helpless and anxious, their future would be dark so their love became dark
Eighth: Romeo didn't want to stay anymore and not sure about the future. "Farewell, farewell" "maybe not see again" "dry sorrow drinks our blood"
Conclusion

Thesis: I acted in Romeo’s perspective and used intensive emotion, opposite tones, two music styles and contrasting color costumes to stage the balcony scenes to show how desperation changed Romeo and Juliet's love and ultimately caused the tragedy.